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VPF 1.7844
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napapaisip ka pa ba ano pang maiimprove sa resume mo? Pwede mong gawing guide to ⬇️ #careershift #resume #tutorial #jobseeker #hiring
Transcript
Because it's like you're saying that You just lifted or just lifted you to your old self Company Full resume Column is single so abs can read The sequence is good Change your place Experience tsaka skills And then all You don't have a problem The one is okay Objectives skills Projects Farm license Education The one in Contents of You only experience the Lead of Revision I always say in resume review Asr Action Verb Responsibility as a result Per bullet So there should be a bullet here Is using ar And lacking all Your bullets All You are here Is only using Action Verb What's more Responsibility But nothing Results Besides, I noticed all the Action Birds You are here It is not strong So assisted The coordinated one That's still possible Used Supported Coordinated collaborated Instead of Assisted Tsaka health Because it's like you're saying that You just lifted or just lifted you to your old self Company They don't want that, they want you to be the one who lifts They can get a lot from you they want You are proactive And then you change it What's more Real work must come first Experience before that internship Overall you have to improve the bullet Your contents And then the layout of the entire resume Like this So role before Company name or Company name New role Anything And then here is Two forty hours intern Then the one location That should be here too So would suggest That you use harvard template So that you don't have a hard time And to mag Improved The day out of the resume This resume would be rated overall As six out of ten Check out my website If you want to increase your chances of getting Interviews by tailoring your resume For each job post Visit fix resume dot io
Hook analysis
brand_fit: with_changes“Because it's like you're saying that you just lifted or just lifted you to your old self company.”
Pattern
bold_statement
Format
screen_walkthrough
Topic
resume-not-working
Sub-topic
resume bullet action verbs and results
Content angle
your bullets describe duties, not the value you produced
CTA
Visit fixresume.io to tailor your resume per job post
Narrative structure
punchline clip -> section-by-section teardown -> score out of ten -> product CTA
AU transplant
with_changes
Transplant note
The teardown-and-score structure transplants cleanly: single-column for ATS, work experience before education, and the Action-Verb/Responsibility/Result bullet rule are all valid for corporate Australia. What must change: the Tagalog-English code-switching, the Philippine resume conventions implied (objectives section, 240-hour internship, campus/province lines), and the plug for a Harvard template plus an external resume tool. No US-specific visa or salary claims to strip.
Brand fit note
Passes the 'is there a real mechanism' check — ASR per bullet and the swap of weak verbs (assisted, supported) for proactive ones is teachable, and the 6/10 score is a number. But it fails other checks: no contrarian inversion, no cost accounting in dollars/counts/time, contempt is pointed at the reader's resume rather than at the systems that taught them to write it, and the CTA sells a third-party resume tool instead of Ark's offer. Rebuild as subdivision teaching (which kind of bullet: duty bullet vs value bullet) with a named cost, e.g. '$200,000 degree, and nobody taught you the third clause of a bullet.'
Why it performed
Not written yet.