Transplant note

Already an AU creator, so the whole structure carries: cold open on a practitioner claim ('things I delete from my clients' resumes'), then a rapid delete-list. AU-relevant specifics survive — no home address, no grades, cutting pre-2011 experience, no graduation year. Nothing here depends on US visa law or US salary bands. For an internationally-trained audience you'd add the migrant-specific deletions (overseas address blocks, home-country referee titles, full academic transcripts) which is where the differentiation lives.

Brand fit note

The delete-list shape is very usable and the 'AI slop words / soft skills / basic technology' items are blunt and specific in the right way. Two problems. First, the CTA is a funnel into a third-party paid template bundle — the doc's with_changes trigger for promoting a paid program — and 'delete the entire thing if it's not on my template' is a product claim, not a mechanism. Second, it fails the numbers check: 'you will be penalized for keyword stuffing' asserts an outcome with no figure, and there is no cost accounting anywhere (how many resumes, what percentage screened out, what the ATS actually does). Note it does not trip Never ships — cutting graduation year and address is omission, not misrepresentation. To ship: keep the list, add why each line costs the reader in screening terms, attach one real number, and replace the bundle CTA.