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5/10. Bakit kaya? Ganito rin ba itsura ng resume mo? Panoorin mo to and let’s see ano pang pwede ma-improve 🔍 #resume #careershift #jobhiring #howto #jobseeker
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I just ask did you use Asi here Your resume will rate overall As five out of ten Full resume Your template is single column so it can be read Tons of ats Good so as long as you shave the right keyword in You plan Company You have passed the ats which is the first screening Although I'm just commenting Your formatting here at Experience your section so date should come first New si location This is your company here It is here at the height of The job title is related Here you don't need to put the one Your senior high Because it's college Educational Attainment So that's enough Then let's inspect the most important and most meeting A resume Mo which is the work Experience Like you see the sabe Each bullet should have their own Action Verb Responsibility And results Or each bullet anyway If you have access to kpi or if you yourself I have an idea what your rough estimate is Your performance As you guys used to Companies The bullets In your work Experience section It's very Interesting Because I just saw something like this Formatting of work Experience Bullets So apart from the one you prioritized Main description What you did You are describing the responsibilities here In detail I just ask did you use Asi here I'm not against ai But would recommend that you restructure All of your bullets To form a complete and cohesive sentence You are also here to add a result because Action Verb besides You only have responsibility Then here The past must be tense Action Verb You are here Because you are done with your work Unlike this Present ten Because you are still working Your resume will rate overall As five out of ten You will always remember The core A resume It is yours Always the experience Without that The chance is great Recruiters will overlook you That's it Good luck
Hook analysis
brand_fit: with_changes“I just ask did you use Asi here.”
Pattern
receipt
Format
screen_walkthrough
Topic
resume-not-working
Sub-topic
resume bullet structure and ATS
Content angle
your bullets list responsibilities, not results, so recruiters skip you
CTA
—
Narrative structure
live audit of a real resume -> section-by-section fixes -> score -> closing principle
AU transplant
with_changes
Transplant note
The audit shape transplants cleanly: single-column template for ATS, date/location/company/title ordering, one bullet = action verb + responsibility + result, past tense for finished roles vs present for current. What needs changing is language (the original is Taglish and would need to be English for a Melbourne audience), the 'senior high / college educational attainment' section which is a Philippine schooling structure with no Australian equivalent (would become 'don't list your overseas high school, list the degree and its Australian recognition'), and the implied local hiring norms. No US/AU-specific visa or salary claims to strip, so the transplant risk is low.
Brand fit note
Usable: it's a real mechanism, not encouragement (action verb + responsibility + quantified result; tense consistency; single-column for ATS parsing), and the 5/10 score gives one number, satisfying the 'is there a real mechanism' and 'is there at least one number' checks. But the substance is what a generic career coach ships — 'add keywords', 'recruiters will overlook you' — with no contrarian inversion and no cost accounting (no dollar figures, no application counts). To fit, it needs the subdivision move (what KIND of results belong in a bullet for a governance analyst vs a dashboarding analyst), contempt aimed at the systems that taught people to write duty-lists, and hard numbers. Also note the KPI advice sits close to the 'never advise fabrication' line: any rebuild must say estimate honestly from real work, never invent metrics.
Why it performed
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