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Ganito na rin ba itsura ng resume mo? And you're wondering if it's good enough? Watch this #careershift #resume #tips #advice #jobseeker
Transcript
When there is a gap maybe say What did you do within Twenty days full resume He is single column so that ats good can be read And then his template is actually I'm familiar with it because he has a good fixed resume The sequence is okay First Experience before Education tsaka skills And then his skill section is on Only a single column So he can easily be nursed by those And those are the ones Your education So even the one General Just location like city What's more province so Organeta City Pangasinan And then you can also remove the ordane Campus since he is placed in location Your dates in Experience No need when exact date So even just months and years Don't be the day itself because it might be said What did you do within Twenty days there are recruiters like that Then next is the work Experience section I always say in the resume My reviews are Asr For each bullet action verb Responsibility Good because those are strong action verbs Then there and then shang responsibility For each bullet Then Merundang So to optimize results Revenue and cost efficiency Improving visibility into Receivables And cash flow Performance And then Significantly Reducing Operational Battle next and Enhancing data Accuracy Off cam I chinecked his bullet And everything is complete with err So my only comment here is that you don't have a matrix So you have a lot Results but you don't have a matrix at all So the matrix is not putting him Per bullet He is only placed if Available Because the matrix What is being looked at For the recruiter to know How important is the Your impact Your old one Company How heavy is the contribution That you did in your previous work Anyways I wouldn't relate to the resume Because he has a good fixed resume And maybe I'm biased But he is complete The only thing he lacks is matrix good luck
Hook analysis
brand_fit: with_changes“When there is a gap maybe say, what did you do within twenty days?”
Pattern
warning
Format
screen_walkthrough
Topic
resume-not-working
Sub-topic
resume dates, location detail, metrics
Content angle
results without metrics don't prove the size of your impact
CTA
—
Narrative structure
warning clip -> section audit -> single missing element (metrics) -> verdict
AU transplant
with_changes
Transplant note
Transplants with edits. Carry over: month-and-year dates only (exact dates invite gap interrogation), single-column for ATS, cutting redundant location lines, and metrics attached to results only where they exist. Change: the Philippine location examples (Urdaneta City, Pangasinan, campus naming), the Tagalog delivery, and the plug for the presenter's own resume template. No US visa or salary content to remove.
Brand fit note
There is a real mechanism (ASR bullets, metrics placed only where available, month/year dates to avoid gap questions) which passes the mechanism check. Problems: zero cost accounting in dollars, counts or time; the presenter promotes his own paid resume product mid-review and openly says 'maybe I'm biased', which reads as sales rather than teaching; and much of the audio is affirmation filler no different from generic career advice. The 'recruiters will ask what you did in twenty days' beat is the salvageable core — reframe it as a contrarian inversion about a recruiter reading for reasons to reject, keep contempt on the screening system rather than the candidate, and add a number (applications sent, callback rate) before it ships.
Why it performed
Not written yet.